Friday, March 2, 2012

New And Improved Prologue For A Coming Chaos

Alright everybody, I tinkered with the old prologue a little bit. Here's the new one: 
Prologue
The forest was dark. the scuffling of prey sounded all around. A dark tabby and a dark brown tom stepped out of the
undergrowth.“The time has come. Hawkfrost, the the last recruit is
old enough to join with us. He will be the leader of our powerful
force.” the tabby murmured.
“ I will do my best to teach him Tigerstar.” The tom meowed excitedly.
“ just make sure he doesn't use his skills against us” another cat stepped
out of the undergrowth.
“ Ah, Brokentail why do you suspect this
cat to turn against us?” Tigerstar meowed.
“ This cat is very noble to Starclan. We might not be able to convince him” meowed Brokentail.
“ He has a point.” Hawkfrost mewed.
Tigerstar mewed reluctantly “ Very well, we will discuss this later. Hawkfrost, you are not to contact the chosen cat until we have decided what to do next.”
“ Yes Tigerstar” Hawkfrost meowed. The scuffling sound was getting closer.
let's hunt”Tigerstar meowed.

Thursday, March 1, 2012

A Coming Chaos

Hi everybody! Sorry I haven't been on in so long! I 've had alot to do! Anyway, I'm righting a new book in the warriors series called A Coming Chaos! Pretty
catchy name isn't it? Here's the prologue:
Prologue
A dark tabby and a dark brown tom stepped out of the
undergrowth.“The time has come. Hawkfrost, the the last recruit is
old enough to join with us. He will be the leader of our powerful
force.” the tabby murmured.
“ I will do my best to teach him Tigerstar.”
“ just make sure he doesn't use his skills against us” another cat stepped
out of the undergrowth.
“ Ah, Brokentail why do you suspect this
cat to turn against us?” Tigerstar said.
“ This cat is very noble to Starclan. We might not be able to convince him” said Brokentail.
“ He has a point.” said Hawkfrost.
Tigerstar mewed reluctantly “ Very well, we will discuss this later. Hawkfrost, you are not to contact the chosen cat until we have decided what to do next.”
“ Yes Tigerstar” Hawkfrost meowed.