catchy name isn't it? Here's the prologue:
Prologue
A dark tabby and a dark brown tom stepped out of the
undergrowth.“The time has come. Hawkfrost, the the last recruit is
old enough to join with us. He will be the leader of our powerful
force.” the tabby murmured.
“ I will do my best to teach him Tigerstar.”
“ just make sure he doesn't use his skills against us” another cat stepped
out of the undergrowth.
“ Ah, Brokentail why do you suspect this
cat to turn against us?” Tigerstar said.
“ This cat is very noble to Starclan. We might not be able to convince him” said Brokentail.
“ He has a point.” said Hawkfrost.
Tigerstar mewed reluctantly “ Very well, we will discuss this later. Hawkfrost, you are not to contact the chosen cat until we have decided what to do next.”
“ Yes Tigerstar” Hawkfrost meowed.
Yay! Another Warriors fanfic book!
ReplyDeleteHere's some tips for your Prologue:
ReplyDelete1. For the first paragraph, describe the setting. If the setting is the Dark Forest, talk about the sounds, how there is no light,etc.
2.Instead of using "said", use meowed, mewed, hissed, yowled or purred.
3.Try to put some detail in the middle.
Other than that, It's a great Prologue!