New And Improved Prologue For A Coming Chaos

Alright everybody, I tinkered with the old prologue a little bit. Here's the new one: 

Prologue

The forest was dark. the scuffling of prey sounded all around. A dark tabby and a dark brown tom stepped out of the

undergrowth.“The time has come. Hawkfrost, the the last recruit is

old enough to join with us. He will be the leader of our powerful

force.” the tabby murmured.

“ I will do my best to teach him Tigerstar.” The tom meowed excitedly.

“ just make sure he doesn't use his skills against us” another cat stepped

out of the undergrowth.

“ Ah, Brokentail why do you suspect this

cat to turn against us?” Tigerstar meowed.

“ This cat is very noble to Starclan. We might not be able to convince him” meowed Brokentail.

“ He has a point.” Hawkfrost mewed.

Tigerstar mewed reluctantly “ Very well, we will discuss this later. Hawkfrost, you are not to contact the chosen cat until we have decided what to do next.”

“ Yes Tigerstar” Hawkfrost meowed. The scuffling sound was getting closer.

“ let's hunt”Tigerstar meowed.